it was a lovely evening
say what?
an evening you say?
could that be that I missed it
dissolved it
in my sunset gold whiskey
and drank it all away
you sat there watching?
you didn't tell me
the light was fading,
why didn't you
The ice melt gently
but you made my time melt
into a puddle of astonishment
and I have nothing to show now
for that day, except now
I have this revelation
that will be a reminder
that harrows, curls, and hurts
what evening?
when?
Alternate version
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it was a lovely evening
say what?
an evening you say?
could that be
that I missed it
dissolved it
in my sunset gold whiskey
and drank it all away
you sat there
watching?
you didn't
tell me
the light was fading,
why
why didn't you
As the ice
melt gently
you let my time melt
into a puddle
of astonishment
you always are
a wonder to behold
not sure if I said it
enough,
or more
I have nothing
to show now
for that day,
except now
I have
this revelation
that will
be a reminder
that harrows
curls,
hurts
what evening?
when?
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