शापबंध

तू विश्वास दिलास, जणू श्रीरामाच्या चरणीचा वरदहस्त,

पण लक्ष्मणरेषेच्या सीमेत माझा जीव अडकला होता।

तुझ्या स्पर्शाने झाले दिव्य, तरी त्या जादूच्या मागे

रावणाच्या छाया फेर धरत होत्या…

आत्मा कधीच गुंफला गेला, जणू युद्धात पडलेल्या गंधर्वाचे गीत,

तू होतीस माझा अभिमान—की फक्त मोहाचा खेळ?

जीवनाच्या एका कोपऱ्यात प्रेम फसले होते,

आणि उरले फक्त शापासारख्या आठवणींचे वळसे…

हे डोळे आता दगडासारखे, जणू गांधारीच्या शापाचा अंधार,

तुझ्या हास्याने ते वणव्यासारखे झळकतात, जसे कुरुक्षेत्रातील अंतिम निर्णायक क्षण।

ते देवत्व नव्हते—फक्त मायाच होती,

शकुनीच्या खेळात हरलेल्या भावनांसारखी…

नारायणाने जणू कोरली, माझ्या प्रवासाची ती युद्धभूमी,

माझा गर्व अर्जुनासारखा, ज्याचा सारथी फक्त दैव।

पुन्हा मला मोडणारा, जिद्दीचा उध्वस्त अश्वमेध,

ही पृथ्वीवरील प्रेमाची, द्रौपदीच्या आक्रोशाची प्रतिमा।

Getting AI to write a poem from the english version. Also making a mess qith adding throwbacks to Ramaya and Mahabharat, and also adding metaphorical random stuff 

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### **1. तू विश्वास दिलास, जणू श्रीरामाच्या चरणीचा वरदहस्त,**

**Meaning:** *You gave me trust, as though it were the divine blessing from Lord Rama’s feet.*

**Reference:** Shri Ram’s “वरदहस्त” (blessing hand) symbolizes divine protection, truth, and unwavering support.

**Implication:** The speaker believed your presence was sacred, like divine trust itself.

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### **2. पण लक्ष्मणरेषेच्या सीमेत माझा जीव अडकला होता।**

**Meaning:** *But my soul was trapped within the boundaries of the Lakshman Rekha.*

**Reference:** In the Ramayana, Lakshman draws a protective line around Sita, instructing her not to cross it.

**Implication:** Despite trust, there were unseen restrictions—emotional boundaries or societal rules—that trapped the speaker.

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### **3. तुझ्या स्पर्शाने झाले दिव्य, तरी त्या जादूच्या मागे**

**Meaning:** *Your touch felt divine, yet behind that magic…*

**Tone:** A sense of enchantment, beauty, or sensuality—but with foreshadowing of deceit.

**Implication:** The speaker felt elevated by the connection but hints at illusion.

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### **4. रावणाच्या छाया फेर धरत होत्या…**

**Meaning:** *…shadows of Ravana were dancing around.*

**Reference:** Ravana symbolises deceit, illusion, temptation.

**Implication:** The divine feeling may have been a trap—like Sita’s abduction after crossing the line.

**Metaphor:** Hidden darkness beneath beauty; manipulation under love.

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### **5. आत्मा कधीच गुंफला गेला, जणू युद्धात पडलेल्या गंधर्वाचे गीत,**

**Meaning:** *The soul was already entangled, like a song of a Gandharva fallen in battle.*

**Reference:** Gandharvas are celestial musicians; their fall in battle symbolizes beauty destroyed by violence.

**Metaphor:** The soul is poetic, but shattered by conflict—love that turned tragic.

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### **6. तू होतीस माझा अभिमान—की फक्त मोहाचा खेळ?**

**Meaning:** *Were you my pride—or just a game of illusion/desire?*

**Tone:** Doubt, regret, reflection.

**Metaphor:** Questioning whether the love was real or just infatuation.

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### **7. जीवनाच्या एका कोपऱ्यात प्रेम फसले होते,**

**Meaning:** *In a corner of life, love had failed.*

**Tone:** Quiet tragedy.

**Implication:** A small part of life, yet deeply impactful.

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### **8. आणि उरले फक्त शापासारख्या आठवणींचे वळसे…**

**Meaning:** *And all that remained were curved trails of cursed memories.*

**Metaphor:** Memories as serpentine, lingering curses—painful and inescapable.

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### **9. हे डोळे आता दगडासारखे, जणू गांधारीच्या शापाचा अंधार,**

**Meaning:** *These eyes have now turned to stone, like the darkness of Gandhari’s curse.*

**Reference:** Gandhari, blindfolded wife of Dhritarashtra, curses Krishna after the war.

**Metaphor:** Grief, bitterness, and loss so intense, it causes emotional blindness.

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### **10. तुझ्या हास्याने ते वणव्यासारखे झळकतात, जसे कुरुक्षेत्रातील अंतिम निर्णायक क्षण।**

**Meaning:** *Your smile still flares like wildfire, like the final moments of Kurukshetra.*

**Reference:** Mahabharata’s battlefield—intense, fiery, final.

**Metaphor:** The memory of the lover’s smile is powerful, like the climactic moment of war.

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### **11. ते देवत्व नव्हते—फक्त मायाच होती,**

**Meaning:** *It wasn’t divinity—it was merely illusion.*

**Metaphor:** Love seemed spiritual, but it was deceptive.

**Implication:** Realization of being misled by emotional delusion.

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### **12. शकुनीच्या खेळात हरलेल्या भावनांसारखी…**

**Meaning:** *Like emotions defeated in Shakuni’s game.*

**Reference:** Shakuni’s dice games led to Draupadi’s humiliation and the war.

**Metaphor:** Manipulated emotions, a sense of betrayal through clever deception.

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### **13. नारायणाने जणू कोरली, माझ्या प्रवासाची ती युद्धभूमी,**

**Meaning:** *As if Narayan himself carved my path as a battlefield.*

**Reference:** Narayan (Vishnu) as the divine orchestrator.

**Tone:** Resigned to divine will—fate itself authored the pain.

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### **14. माझा गर्व अर्जुनासारखा, ज्याचा सारथी फक्त दैव।**

**Meaning:** *My pride was like Arjuna’s, with destiny as the only charioteer.*

**Reference:** Krishna as Arjuna’s charioteer during Mahabharata. Here, ‘destiny’ replaces Krishna.

**Metaphor:** Lack of control; surrendering agency to fate.

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### **15. पुन्हा मला मोडणारा, जिद्दीचा उध्वस्त अश्वमेध,**

**Meaning:** *Breaking me again—a ruined Ashwamedha of stubbornness.*

**Reference:** Ashwamedha Yagna—symbol of power and conquest.

**Metaphor:** A grand effort (possibly love or ego) that ended in destruction.

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### **16. ही पृथ्वीवरील प्रेमाची, द्रौपदीच्या आक्रोशाची प्रतिमा।**

**Meaning:** *A symbol of earthly love, echoing Draupadi’s wail.*

**Reference:** Draupadi’s humiliation and cry in court—a moment of violated dignity.

**Metaphor:** Love’s suffering likened to one of the most tragic cries in Indian epic history.

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### Final Thoughts:

This poem is **deeply rooted in Indian epics**, blending **mythological imagery with personal heartbreak**. The speaker navigates **trust, illusion, betrayal, pride, and fate** through **metaphorical references to Ramayana and Mahabharata**, turning personal grief into **mythic tragedy**.

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